Sorry for such late feedback (I've only just joined the community), but this piece is a stunner! I normally say which phrases or lines most affected me, but I couldn't possibly choose. I love this. The way you entangle the natural world with the urban and built world, and the way you bring in the intimacy of the experience of fertility. …
Sorry for such late feedback (I've only just joined the community), but this piece is a stunner! I normally say which phrases or lines most affected me, but I couldn't possibly choose. I love this. The way you entangle the natural world with the urban and built world, and the way you bring in the intimacy of the experience of fertility. Plus the intrigue of the musician! A really wonderful piece of writing. I look forward to reading more from you as I trawl through the archives.
Thank you Wendy, that's really encouraging and generous feedback. One of the great things about the space Tanya's created here is its open nature regarding timing of submitting and reading.
Sorry for such late feedback (I've only just joined the community), but this piece is a stunner! I normally say which phrases or lines most affected me, but I couldn't possibly choose. I love this. The way you entangle the natural world with the urban and built world, and the way you bring in the intimacy of the experience of fertility. Plus the intrigue of the musician! A really wonderful piece of writing. I look forward to reading more from you as I trawl through the archives.
Thank you Wendy, that's really encouraging and generous feedback. One of the great things about the space Tanya's created here is its open nature regarding timing of submitting and reading.